So far we've had a few mix ups over the story but we're very nearly settled.
So far we have a man sitting at his desk on his computor, when his friend on webcam comes on and tells him hes found the file they've been looking for he becomes a bit anxious. As the file downloads onto the mans computor the webcam shows his friend being wrestled around by a government official. Now at this point he either uses print screen to get a picture of what is happening or he recieves the file and sees its contaminants. This causes a flashback to his past where a scene is shown of his mother being taken by the government officials. His reaction to this memory will be shown then there will be a short scene of the main character perfoming an everyday activity like cooking or watching television. There will be a cut away and government officials may be shown entering a front garden and walking up a pathway while constantly cutting inbetween the acitvity and government men at a quickening pace to build tension and then a knock will be heard by the main character and after the reaction is shown the opening will end.
Sound good?
why not give us some feedback and any tips for improvements?
thanks for reading
Sam
Tuesday, 13 January 2009
Basic Storyline for our thriller
Posted by Sam25 at 11:11
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2 comments:
aww lol poor guys hope its going gd
ohh wot file ;D i wanna kno :(
:O oh noes :(
hmm hehe i would go for the recieves file ;D
stupid goverment :O he poor mother :(
ohhh cooking is fun make him coo ksomething thrilling xD scuse the pun ;)
that sounds rather cool i wanna watch it!
hmm i dunno sounds pretty gd ;D
so far keep up the good work!
wow! Yousound like you have worked really hard on this. i think the storyline sounds really intresting and gripped, but with the mix of the politcal issues and domestic and i am not sure if simpl minded people (i.e me) would understand it. I really like the use of web cam and item that is often used and not seen as something supernatural so it gives the story originality.
I am sure it willl be good whatever you end up doing.
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